Thursday, February 19, 2009


इक नज़्म  
टूट के बिखर गयी है
मै कब से 
लगी हूँ उसे समेटने मे 

यह नज़्में भी 
ज़िंदगी की तरह ही है 
कितना मुश्किल है 
दोनो को समेटना 

 - मेयनूर

4 comments:

  1. Nazm kabhi tuutati nahi hai; jo tuutata hai voh shabdon ka raafta, aur voh isliye ki nazm ko likhaney main samazdaari na ho..... vaisey likhane ka dhang achcha hai.

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  2. Dear aameen da, you rightly got the nazm... by saying "ik nazm tut ke bikhar gayi hai" i meant by d wordings and its a style to have ur say.... aur aap jaise padne wale nazm ko mil jaaye, ussey acha kya hoga.... thanks for your comment.. keep visiting

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  3. jab ehsaas khatm ho jati hain...to kitni bhi achhi nazm ho toot jati hai...bahut khub...

    swapnil

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